by dexeron » Thu Apr 25, 2013 12:04 pm
OMG, I have never read such a load of self-masterbatory wish-fulfilment bullshit.
The author is, I'm guessing, painting what he thinks of as this perfect wonderful utopia, plops a Mary Sue stand-in from our world, and uses that stand-in to point out how much "better" this liber-topia is.
Admittedly, a Mary Sue "fish out of water" is kind of the best way to DO such a story, but oh my god, are you fucking kidding me. The scene where he's being basically shouted at by that one girl because HOW DARE HE HOLD SUCH OUTDATED ANTIFREEDOM VALUES and it reads so much like the author lecturing us. The constant: "Well, in my world, we do X!"; "Our world is better, because Y!" without ever bothering to address the negative consequences that go with Y - only the negatives associated with X, and none of the positives. It's all overly simplistic, late at night sitting around, high as fuck in a freshman dorm, thinking you've come up with the answers (in an half hour) to questions people have wrestled with for thousands of years, level logic. "Man, if only people'd give libertarianism a REAL CHANCE. We could fix EVERYTHING, man!"
OMG This is fucking stupid/insane.